AFL

Every Wednesday Class 4 goes out to AFL which mean’s Australian Football League. We leave Class at 9:40 to get started with our sport. Our Coach is Tim, first we played Rats and Rabbits for the warm up. Whenever Tim says Rat the Rabbits chase after the Rat.

After the game we played another game which was called the Ruck. When we started the game Me and Dhara standard side by side Sisilia throw the ball powerfully. Dhara win that one because she jumped powerful.

While I  was running around I started to get sweaty. We played another game but I forgot what it was called. It was easy to chase the people in the other team but then it got hard. Our Team tried to be careful with the ball but I kept on throwing it somewhere else.

Ane Writing Analysis Team 2

Dodge Ball Friday

Every Friday Team 5 have  had dodge ball and they also  play against other classes . Most of the times when Team 5 have Miss Tito  while there go somewhere they have Miss Tito. When we first did our Practices Miss Tito looked at us and we weren't working as a Team or going for the good player’s.

Heaps of us weren't working as a Team they were just going for other player’s. She said to  us if we don’t work as a Team we will lose the game against the other classes. Our reifes are our Pt England year 8’s Miss Tito picked them because they offered.

We had finished our Practice so the next day we played with Class 3. We went behind the line and when Miss Tito blown the whistle and we run to go get it. We never worked as a Team as Miss Tito said. She was saying it while we were throwing the balls.

I got out so I went to set on the chair if someone caught the ball they will get out and then I could go back on. We lost the game and we played some more games just for fun the other one was for to see who wins.

The next day we worked as a Team and that was good. While we were play I was look at Mele sneaking by the side and she got Htawara out. Than I got out now I know to look at people from the other side not mine. I really enjoyed dodge ball with Classes.

Violin presentation

Cold Days

Today it is a freezing day,when I looked outside it was foggy. While I went outside I was shivering and while I was  breathing Steam came out of my mouth. So I started walking while my body was numb.

While I got out of my bed I started to shiver. My mum already left to work so I had to walk! As Soon as I got changed I went outside and the grass was iced. Suddenly my Teeth were cheating while I was walking to school.

Is My Writing Effective?	√
Are my paragraph/s about one MAIN idea?	√
Do my paragraph/s have more than one sentence?  (usually 2-4)	√
Are the sentences connected and build up the MAIN idea?	√
Do my sentences in my paragraphs begin in different ways?	√
Are the sentences varied?  e.g. in length, in complexity	√
Have I used different types of sentences?   e.g Statements(.) Questions(?) Exclamations(!) OR Speech (“ “)	√
Have  I carefully chosen words/vocabulary in my sentences?	√
Do my sentences and paragraphs meet the purpose?	√
Do my sentences/paragraphs appeal to the reader/audience?	√
Have I checked my writing for grammatical, punctuation and spelling errors?	√

Article Week 6

England Flag.

The England flag represents the St George Cross. The England flag is the most populated country in the United kingdom. The red cross is an emblem of an England that can also be traced to the middle ages.They were also bordered by the Wales to the west Scotland to north.

Population of England was in 2014 like around 53 million. The Caption city in England is London. There longest river is in the United Kingdom the river Severn. The name of the longest river is called Winder mere.

Park Jae-Sang Par

Did you know Park Jae-Sang Par was the one that made Gangnam Style in 2012. He got famous while that song came on.  Park Jae-Sang Par was born in December 31 1977. So that was Twelve Months ago that was very a long time ago.

Park Jae-Sang has a fake name and it is PSY. He is a good singing and dancer as well. Park Jae-Sang  came famous by his song Gangnam Style. I actually liked how he did his dancing, that was really funny and cool.