On Thursday Room 15 was excited because we were going to play baseball. we had to sat down on the grass cola toId room 15 about the rule’s and then he toled catching the ball bating and he was sowing us how to bat and holding the gIove. Pepsi was bating fist I was nervous when it when it was my tone bating. I made a home run two times.It was very run we played on the field we had a tie.
Hi Ane nice story.
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Hi Ane next time make sure you proof read and get your spelling right!
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HI ANE,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story. It was really interesting. I hope to see more writing but by the way keep up the great writing.
Hi Ane,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story about baseball,it sounded like you had heaps of fun and it also sounds like you like baseball well thats what I am thinking any-way maybe next time you could proof read your story so it makes more sense.
KAI-PAI ANE! KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITING EXPERIENCE.