Tuesday, March 25, 2014

An Show Not Tell


Please can I go to the mall  . She said No your not coming you're going to be annoying again. So Emily’s face went red and she yelled at her. She stamped and went to her room.


Screen Shhhhh!’’ What's that screeching noise’’  MADDIE mumbled to herself. Shepeaked out of her blanket and saw a strange shadow shaped as a ghost. Her heart started pounding, her mouth dried up and she started shaking uncontrollably, begging for mercy.

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