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Tuesday, March 25, 2014

An Show Not Tell

Angry:

Please can I go to the mall  . She said No your not coming you're going to be annoying again. So Emily’s face went red and she yelled at her. She stamped and went to her room.


Nervous:


Screen Shhhhh!’’ What's that screeching noise’’  MADDIE mumbled to herself. Shepeaked out of her blanket and saw a strange shadow shaped as a ghost. Her heart started pounding, her mouth dried up and she started shaking uncontrollably, begging for mercy.

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